Wednesday 12 November 2014

The outline of an essay ( class assigment)

Don't support private schools!
I. The number of private schools is increasing day by day all over the world.
II. Very expensive 
    A. Private schools are more expensive than the public ones
    B. Going to a Private school is expensive 
         1. Wear uniform 
         2. Buy books from school
         3. Buy part of the material- that you are going to be ask to bring to class- on the school.
 III. Sometimes at a private school you don't learn as much as in a public one 
        A. Many times teachers don't have the right experience/qualification 
             1. They have bought their post in order to work there
        B Students " Buy" their marks
            1. As their parents are paying the school they always get good marks 
            2. If they fail a year , instead of doing it again their parents are going to pay for the marks
 IV. There is a great possibility of going to university without knowing all you should have
       A. They have bought their marks
             1. They have not learn anything 
             2. They think they know everything they should know
        B. If they do Bachillerato in a different schol there are more chances of do again a year
             1. They don't have the appropiate knowledge acording to the level
             2. They can't stand the preasure of a new thing in which money is not allowed
V. Because of the cost, the little things that you learn and money; we should support public schools. 

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